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 Posted:   Mar 31, 2018 - 4:10 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Bruce, those first 4 lines were great. How were the last few lines? wink

 
 Posted:   Apr 1, 2018 - 4:34 PM   
 By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member)

But he was quick on the draw
And Wyatt's word was law.

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 1, 2018 - 5:01 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

A rhyming couplet. Borrowed or original?

 
 Posted:   Apr 1, 2018 - 5:07 PM   
 By:   Bill Carson, Earl of Poncey   (Member)

My finest work, joanie, i swear, guvnor. strewth!



Ps never believe a word i type. wink

 
 Posted:   Apr 1, 2018 - 11:21 PM   
 By:   'Lenny Bruce' Marshall   (Member)

Bruce, those first 4 lines were great. How were the last few lines? wink

I dont know.
I didn't read them

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 3, 2018 - 6:26 AM   
 By:   Tall Guy   (Member)

In films, don’t you just hate it when
The hero runs back in again
To save the kid, the dog, the cat
At best they’re seven out of ten

Or some complaining little brat
Always whiny, often fat
Turns upon the bully-boys
And lays about them with a bat.

A hawker hears a roaring noise
And in the distance, just like toys
Two chasing cars towards him fly
His pile of stock the race destroys

The clichés keep on coming by
I can’t ignore them, wouldn’t try
For I have bigger fish to fry
For I have bigger fish to fry

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 3, 2018 - 8:28 AM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Love TG's Stopping By The Movies On Any Evening. Well done, sir.

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 3, 2018 - 4:09 PM   
 By:   Tall Guy   (Member)

Love TG's Stopping By The Movies On Any Evening. Well done, sir.

Why, thank you Joan. But Frosty did it first smile

 
 Posted:   Apr 3, 2018 - 8:31 PM   
 By:   DOGBELLE   (Member)

there is dust in my brain.
it's true! there is dust in my brain.
I run here and there. but the fact remains there is dust in my brain.
I ask how did it get there? Then it hits between my eyes.
it went up my nose while I was dusting.
Japanese had it right all along. A mask, a mask I must find a mask.
what's this a police car? I shout "there's dust in my brain.
They look very strange
at me.
Why is it so hard to see I have dust in my brain.
next thing I know I'm being taken away.
It's the dust, the dust caused all this.
Help! just get some suction up noise.
it's no help. look its, nurse , Nurse Ratched
she will understand. it just dust in my brain.

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 3, 2018 - 10:26 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Watch out, Doggie, for Nurse Ratched. She'll lobotomize your doggie brain when searching for dust.

 
 Posted:   Apr 4, 2018 - 1:15 AM   
 By:   Josh   (Member)

Silent misunderstanding
upended

Who brought the umbrella
I'm not superstitious

Someone said Pterodactyl
and they laughed again

A stone fast glance
broke the tension

Ordinary people
Ride the tide of time

Everyone is strange
As if you had a choice

(don't do it)

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 4, 2018 - 9:51 AM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Keep posting your poems, Josh.

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 25, 2018 - 4:32 PM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

THE BLUE ASH

The envy of others, she
grew slowly, beautifully,
almost perfectly round
like a hot air balloon.
She now leans southerly,
a victim of April’s strong winds.
Unnaturally reaching towards
the sky, her roots form a
northern hump in the grass.
If fully leafed, abusive wind,
caught in pockets of her beauty,
would have been a large hand
crushing a tiny fist,
buckling knees to
the supplicant ground.
Good that her leaves furled,
a barricade for her beauty.
Let her roots, northern hunchback,
and ungainly tilt remind me
to shield personal parts.
Those waving all flags lean
vulnerable to caressing breezes
that turn to bashing winds.
A few unfurled leaves blow
at half mast, an ominous prelude
to forever lying on the ground.



 
 
 Posted:   Apr 26, 2018 - 5:22 AM   
 By:   Tall Guy   (Member)

THE BLUE ASH




Wonderful, Joan

 
 Posted:   Apr 26, 2018 - 6:44 AM   
 By:   jackfu   (Member)

Remember This Just In Case

Tho I’d never say, “I told you so”,
Your wish was very clear.
“Don’t tell me what I need to know;
Just what I want to hear!”

 
 Posted:   Apr 26, 2018 - 7:07 AM   
 By:   jackfu   (Member)

Heard in the "5 Easy Pieces" Diner

Plain toast with coffee was all I wished.
Said you, “Only from the menu, please"!
Then give me a chicken sandwich,
And hold the chicken ‘tween your knees.

 
 Posted:   Apr 26, 2018 - 7:19 AM   
 By:   Jim Phelps   (Member)

THE BLUE ASH

Sounds like Joan Hue's been reading Sylvia Plath. Good work.

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 26, 2018 - 7:35 AM   
 By:   Tall Guy   (Member)

THE BLUE ASH

Sounds like Joan Hue's been reading Sylvia Plath. Good work.



Pshaw! - Joan taught English Lit. to Sylvia Plath!

 
 
 Posted:   Apr 26, 2018 - 9:05 AM   
 By:   joan hue   (Member)

Aww, shucks, TG. Thank you and I'm putting you in my will.

Unfortunately, I missed having Plath in my classroom as she died before I even graduated from high school. I'm not THAT old.

Gracias to Jim P. I'm waiting for a poem from you about Hemingway. smile

Jackfu, what fun poems!!

 
 Posted:   Apr 26, 2018 - 9:48 AM   
 By:   jackfu   (Member)

Joan, thank you!

An Ode to Joan Hue

Joan's words are deep and give us pause.
They help us look within.
I’m happy if my goofy rhymes
Just make you laugh or grin!

smile

 
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